Mastering Law School Admissions: Crafting Compelling 'Why Us' Essays

By Sydney Montgomery, Executive Director & Founder

Greetings, everyone! In today's blog post, we're going to delve into the world of "why us" essays for law school applications. Whether you're a prospective law student or simply interested in understanding the intricacies of crafting a compelling application, this guide will provide you with valuable insights. Let's dive right into the art of writing those crucial "why us" essays.

The Essentials of a "Why Us" Essay

First things first, let's discuss the fundamental aspects of a "why us" essay. Typically, these essays are one page in length and double-spaced. However, the length may vary, ranging from 300 to 600 words, depending on the specific law school's requirements. When composing this essay, remember to keep it personal and avoid regurgitating information readily available on the school's website.

  1. Specificity is Key: Your goal is to create a unique connection between yourself and the law school. Avoid generic statements and instead focus on what genuinely attracts you to the institution. Highlight specific clinics, journals, or programs offered by the school that align with your interests.

  2. Your Personal Narrative: Your law school application is a puzzle, and each piece should contribute to a comprehensive picture of who you are. Drawing from your personal experiences, use storytelling to illuminate your motivations for pursuing a legal education.

  3. Utilize the Story Matrix: If you've followed my Story Matrix brainstorming method, you already have a treasure trove of stories to draw from. These narratives can be woven into your application to make it more engaging and reflective of your unique journey. (Learn how to use the Story Matrix in our courses.)

Preparing to Write Your Essay

Preparation is essential when it comes to crafting impactful "why us" essays. Here are some steps to consider:

  1. Forge Connections: If you haven't already, reach out to law school admissions sessions, professors, students, or alumni. Engaging with these individuals can provide valuable insights and personal anecdotes that you can incorporate into your essay.

  2. Campus Visits: If possible, visit the law school campus to gain a deeper understanding of the environment. This firsthand experience can help you craft a more authentic essay.

  3. Informational Interviews: If you have access to lawyers or professionals, conduct informational interviews to gain a deeper understanding of the legal field. These conversations can offer unique perspectives to include in your essay.

  4. LinkedIn Connections: Leverage LinkedIn to connect with alumni and other individuals associated with the law school. These connections can offer valuable insights and stories that can enhance your essay.

Things to Avoid

Now, let's discuss some common pitfalls to avoid when crafting your "why us" essay:

  1. Avoid Repetition: Don't simply reiterate what's in your personal statement or diversity statement. Use this opportunity to introduce new aspects of your identity and interests.

  2. Don't Overpromise: Be honest about your level of interest in the school. If it's your first-choice institution, express that commitment. However, avoid making false claims if it's not your top choice.

  3. Structure Matters: Ensure your essay follows a clear structure with a beginning, middle, and end. An organized essay is more compelling and easier to follow.

  4. Don't Focus Solely on Prestige: While a law school's reputation matters, emphasize the qualities that make the institution a great fit for you. Avoid fixating on national rankings, as this may come across as insincere.

Final Thoughts

In conclusion, crafting a compelling "why us" essay for law school applications requires a combination of personal storytelling, preparation, and careful attention to detail. By highlighting your unique experiences and forging meaningful connections with the law school community, you can create an essay that sets you apart from the competition.

If you'd like more in-depth guidance, consider exploring our support for law school applicants! As a non-profit, we offer sliding-scale pricing for BIPOC, first-generation, and other marginalized students.

Best of luck with your law school applications, and remember to stay true to yourself throughout the process!

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